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Embrace the cruel animals
to enrage their acts as criminals

Enhance your warring efforts
to entice the peaceful  comforts
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to make yourself angry in columns of  strict calm

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  • poetrandy gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Good advice!

    This one's interesting and different! Good luck in the contest!