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Uncle Bob's Day Out

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Proud of Uncle Bob,eighty one

and going strong, birthdays

lonely for him are long without

aunt Polly to make his day.

Cakes are out as he hates thats

any kind of compassion,we take turns

to celebrate and dinners out on

special occassions.

Happy Birthday uncleBob, this is

for you and a well deserved vacation.

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  • OldBear34 silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Nice Sentiment

    Hope Uncle Bob has many more happy days. In a short piece you packed in a whopping amount of feelings.


  • Midori-Ayana
    December 2, 2008

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    Lovely, lovely!

    My best wishes to your Uncle Bob!

    People, when they get old, sometimes resent or see their birthdays with dismay... I think the ones around them should celebrate, along with him/her, the miracle of life... It is not something common that someone gets to live that long, and be strong and in good health.

    My grandfather is one of those... cranky men sometimes, but we just love to be around him. He's 84, and I know I have so many stuff to learn from him still.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    You know poet

    I just love this. the kindness and warmth and gentle consideration. I could give ya a big hug and i hope you show this to Uncle bob. Ty so much for warming my heart.


  • Joshua DePesa
    December 1, 2008

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    I love it, Very nice. Even though people grow old dosn't mean they shhouldn't be able to have b-day parties to(: Well done(:

    Kudos.


  • aboomer silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Aww - what a lovely sentimental write! So easy to picture a birthday celebration for 'uncle Bob' - this was very nice!
    best wishes in your contest.

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