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Unclothed

I want to expose myself and watch the faces of those who think they know me.
Will they be shocked or just roll their eyes?
We'll see...
I don't care anymore,
My soul needs to come clean with itself.
Come out of it's own shadows,
Unclothed and clean
For the world to see.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 2, 2008

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    this is an interesting kind of poem and i wonder what this is about, keep it flowing and again, keep it flowing