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Straight Lines

I can't draw a straight line
I don't think I ever could
My hands refuse to hold still
The line follows where it will
None of the shapes seem to fit
They always lean, turn and shift
I have been ashamed for all my time
That I could never draw a straight line

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  • moonrays
    August 28
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    Nice

    One womans crooked line is one mans dream. Yeah that didnt make sense at all.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 1, 2008

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    i don't think i can draw a straight line either, but rulers tend to help, keep it flowing my friend, and good to see you writing again.