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A poem for Myspace

Cybernetic spies punch through the barrier everyday
We can always press our chances on a
Fresh New Voice
Then the image deteriorates before your stinging eyes
You are spoon fed the ashes of a
Desperate Degeneration
Your happiness transcribed into digital thought and metaphoric resonance
Bathing in its shadow, the glow's felt all around
I let my hands soak
I lean against it
My eyes cloud pale in blindness
I remove the exhausted parts of me
And nail them up
For the fucking world to see
Handle yourself with care
Until you blather proclamation
With color and swelled arrogance
All the world now loves you

You are pirate

You are cooky/wacky

You are fucking ninja

I'll take your opinion
It matters
Crush it for all the world to see

Author notes

We all fall into the cesspool of social networking. Don't let it delude you.

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Comments

  • Wow I hate myspace...
    this is as close to that place as I get.
    It's like Mysapace... for smart people.
    This reminds me of "something vague" by bright eyes.
    Cool imagery.