Pretold,
I was,
about how you are,
but i don't listen,
I owe that to my heart,
for you enter me,
all I am you know,
you can change.
Pretold,
I was,
of those tricks of yours,
but then again,
I can trick you,
just as easy,
for you and me are one of a kind.
Pretold,
I was,
but I don't care,
cause I love you.
A contest entry
- The limitations of love, not a PIF, just a write! by Topaze.
1750 points, ended December 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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again
aww how sweet
great job
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Thank you for this fine piece, original. A wonderful entry.
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Wow, I love this! The words play with your mind, and the message become strong at the end. Very creative and original, I love what you've done with the prompt.
Well penned,
~lost
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sorry forgot your applaud
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that is really good i really liked it, short and full of explanation
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