And so it blossomed
in all of it's angelic serenity
it's white petals
reaching towards the heavens
and the hushed water
echoing it's pale beauty
casts it's lovliness
into the eyes
of all the people captured
by its enchanting entity
Author notes
DirtyLittlePrincess- Option 5
A contest entry
- white by Cat.
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So beautiful -
it made me think instantly of that flower that they use in the Dennis the Menace film, I can't remember what it is called, but it only 'blossoms' once every ten years or something to that effect - and then dies immediately after?
but the breathtaking descriptions you used here, reflected that so much for me! excellently written - thanks for enterig
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just one thing: "lovliness" is "loveliness".
Very nice and descriptive. I like this part:
And so it blossomed
in all of it's angelic serenity
It sounds enchanting. -
This is really beautiful. I really liked it. The language waqs awesome and the layout was really cool. Well done and good luck in the contests.
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this is such a soft poem...
gentle and sweet.. so white
thanks for entering
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'hushed water echoing pale beauty'.... so serene
i liked the peace here so much
tranquility
and wonder if this is what i will see when i do walk to death
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