i can never really be the hero
and i never really was
when the true test came
i stayed hiding in the darkness
for the one i need to save you from
is myself even though you love me
as i love you, i desire you
but my senses say death
it what is coming for you
i, the cold one make it my mission
for you my love not to join me
sweet bella it is your blood i crave
but i cannot bring myself
to make such a beauty
a monster such as i
your voice is my herroin
your breath my weakness
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you can be the hero
and i believe you can
and when the test comes
i will see your face
staring upon mine
i am not frightened by you
for you are the beautiful one
even as they call you the cold one
it is i that loves you
as the stars love
the moon
you are no monster
you are the hero
in my eyes
edward it is you
that i desire
make me yours
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beautiful maiden
how can you trust me so
my teeth are as daggers
and my skin it does not glow
but if you say you love me
as i secretly love you
then i will try my hardest
and start to see
that there is no need to
save you
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i can never really be the hero
and i never really was
when the true test came
i stayed hiding in the darkness
but it seems for you
i have emerged
and you have seen my true form
as it glimmers in the sunlight
and you say.....
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edward i love you so
and i am not afraid
i find you mesmerising
in every way
so i thank you
for coming out
not hiding anymore
you are my hero
and now i simply wonder
what's in store
Author notes
2 - i can never really be the hero and i never really was when the true test came i stayed hiding in the darkness -- to be the hero
i just finished watching twilight and i took the quote and made it into thoughts between edward {the cold one} and bella...
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Comments
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I like the two divergent voices in this piece, forcing apart though finding harmony and unity at the end.
Good write.
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Very nicely done, my best wishes.
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I really liked this. I liked how it was split up between Edward and Bella's points of veiw, that was very clever thinking. I've just finished reading the second book and am going to see the movie tommorrow. Can't wait!!
Anyway i really liked this.
Well done and good luck.
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I wonder
If the imagination is this wonderful ot two have collaborated on this a very sincer yet dark piece of poetry.
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Wow... That was a great poem.
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This was a great way to make the prompt your own. I think this is a beautiful piece. I hope you do really well in the contest.
Carrie
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very clever. I like the way to did your dialogue break up. Good luck in the contest.
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i love this great job =)
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