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Lost Love

Missing image
Love lost to the cool wind
Sailing on yesterday’s dreams
Only to find tomorrow’s hope

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pic ~ from deviantart.com

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  • DeGraw
    January 1

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    A wonderful free verse poem, beautifully written within the limited perimeters.
    Congratulations on your win!
    Regards,
    DeGraw


  • daviscth silver member
    December 3, 2008
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    Congrats on the silver win dear.


  • daviscth silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    This is a wonderful thirteen words for the picture!! The imagery is awesome. Good luck in the contest.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    "sailing on yesterday's dreams" lovely write

    good luck


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    bravo

    another very good write with that ever nice glimpse of 'hope' peeking through. great work again my friend, lots of luck in the contest.

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