Are you saved by the blood of Jesus?
Are you active in church ministries?
Do you believe in the KJV as the one true Bible?
Can you remember the little things of romance?
Will my sides happily ache from laughter?
Can I put all my worries on your shoulder?
Can I lean on you and not fall to the ground?
Will you love my son as your own?
Can you pull me up to your level, instead of coming down to mine?
Can I depend on you with my life? My son's?
Do you practice what you preach?
Do you love sports & other outdoor activities?
Are you a loyal friend?
Do you listen well?
Do you like cats? Dogs? Both?
Will you always try walk closely with God?
Will you try to be a person I can admire?
Would you try to be a person I can proudly follow?
Will you show me God's love for me (or try to)?
Mostly, will you cultivate my son to follow God's will for his life?
Yes? Then please call me. If not, don't bother.
Author notes
The revised version of what I want in a man. If anyone really does fit the profile, feel free to let me know. If you just want to leave a comment, please do. Read my Author's Page to find out more about me. If I've left something unanswered, ask.
*My best friend is also part of AP....don't make me sic her on your butt!!! 
On second thought, she won't wait for me to do so. Anyone with not-so-nice intentions, buzz off. I don't have time for that.
NOT A POEM
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hmm I want about 95% of that in a man lol. Considering I don't have a son lol. Good luck!
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michaela
Thanks for the comment, though!
Yeah, any guy I date will pretty much have to fit this profile. At least they will know what to expect!
You'll find one, I'm sure. Just make sure God brings him to you!
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Good luck
with all these traits he may already be taken. This is a real find! Good luck though and any of those that don't listen....your Uncle is on All poetry too! Love ya kid....and the kid! LOL uncle Shaker
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thank you
I know, but hey, God may make a man fitting that profile come into my life, yet. I love you, too, Uncle Shaker!
~Bright
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i love god
just because it dosent ryme dosnt mean its not a poem this is a poem because it shows true emotion and love for god i love this poem and hope you stay true with god and keep wrighting poems forever
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cassandra nowak
It's good to know you love God, too! Thank you.
~Bright
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This is a most profound statement and really is so well written, may you always walk with god, blessings John
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john
Many thanks to you. I try everyday. When you're not used to having him in your daily life, it's a challenge.
May you as well,
~Bright
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Iknow I have commented on this once already, but make me the bad guy why dont cha?! Luff ya girl! See ya soon! X
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Did you not notice "revised edition" in parenthases? It's an extension.
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