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snake eyes


one sandman

shoveled soil

in hollowed holes


for tears

that wouldn't sleep

 

 

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  • Nicolette gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Oh this is great - loved it, especially the closing lines!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    deeply creative and emotion driven... x


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Short and powerful.


  • Cannonsfire
    December 1, 2008

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    This sounds so very sad, do you need a hug C


  • Mr.
    December 1, 2008
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    Wow, you really got a lot of meaning in a few words. It was pretty clever.

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