My body isn't working right
But I was brought to you
A kindred clan
Who know my pain
So ready to give up
Up against that unyielding wall
And yet somehow
That was the same moment
I wandered into here
A miracle just when I needed one
A friend just when I was
Ready to give up
A contest entry
- Options For Those In Search Of Something New #2 by kitsmith.
750 points, ended February 6, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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Great take on whatever prompt you used, though I'm not sure what prompt you used, because you didn't put it in your AN, but it was good. Thanks.
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Short, but packed full of meaningfullness! Just how I like em. Great write and I think you are very talented! Keep up the great work!
~Thomas
(That Lyrics Guy)
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love the way this tests desparity by just sticking in the toes, then meets a somewhat nicer destiny.
great work!
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