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Saying Goodbye

Missing image
Gathered beneath the pines,
A single tear falls;
Shoebox in tiny hands.

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A contest entry

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Awww...

    How poignant... Thank you for sharing your heart-felt words... Congratulations on the bronze... Keep it flowing, as they say. Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn xx


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    How beautiful and perfect for the prompt...such moving imagery and depth...very creative, congrat's on the bronze...
    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    how creatively beautiful and sadly expressive... x