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Short Poetic Micro Chasms(micro-poetry)

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Poetry,
From the tip of a quill.
At the poet's command.

 

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Seasoned souls.
Chisel records in time,
Of prolific define
On tablets.

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Passionate fervor,
Torturous eclipse.
Lust for understanding,
The poet's true itch.
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Words,
 that express man's savagery,
Versed in lines of deft gravity.

 

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  • Yemassee silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I like that you kept a theme with your four entries...that of writing. The first is a good introductionm the second I see as a portait of time...writing viewed through history, and of course linking it to humanity. In the third, we see the passion, and in the last, it seems both a summing up and still another view of writing, and of man.

    I also like the format, 3,4,4,3 lines. It gave the whole thing a polished look.

    And on a note, having nothing to do with the contest, I like the little blinking "Welcome" avatar, that is cute...and friendly.

    Thanks for entering the contest and for the understanding for the problems that occurred.


    • suseann silver member
      December 2, 2008
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      Well thank you for having noticed my avatar. And very kind comments. I find myself having been the family image taker without many pictures of myself to use. So.. the "welcome"is a net find and flashes but is low key. Some kind soul granted/gifted a month's gold and I love my mail servers goth text.AP has nothing like it that I've found. Anyhow,thanks for hosting and commenting so positively.I've enjoyed writing for your contest idea.