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Hear time tick away,
Feel my mind stray,
Am I free?
Desert island, peace of mind,
Escape those who raid my mind,
Am I free?
Isolation rips through me,
Free is not what I hoped it'd be,
Rescue me.
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Author notes
“No one is free, even the birds are chained to the sky.”
-Bob Dylan
A contest entry
- 20-40 Words by She Stole My Voice.
400 points, ended December 15, 2008, 20 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short and very pity poem which moves rapidly with a very good flow and nifty rhyme... bravo!!!
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The ending
was heartbreaking.
Thank you for entering and good luck ♥
-rainbow
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