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The Spell

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The mist tumbled down the grassy hillsides
Following the river as it winds on its way
The moon hung low in a balmy night sky
As she thought of the words she would say

Her face was serene, aglow from within
Ice blue eyes in a faraway gaze
Hair blowing softly in the pre dawn breeze
Today was the most important of days

She had traded first for the amethyst stone
Clear quartz took much longer to find
Chrysoprase, in a pretty shade of green
Aventurines colour she didn’t really mind

The witch was kind as she cast the spell
A leather pouch held her stones secure
Fresh rosemary to be placed under her bed
Added the amulet, she could do no more

She returned as told, before break of day
After her cycle had passed for three turns
And her moon phase had shed not a drop
What will he say, when of this he learns?

He would like a son, she just wants a child
Straight of back to grow healthy and tall
She clutches the pouch close to her heart
She will give him the greatest gift of all

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I believe in the unknown. Picture prompt

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  • moonbumps silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    Well done the HM a lovely 'bewitching' story told straight from the heart-
    xxx Hilly


  • Passionate Phoenix
    December 2, 2008

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    wow this is beautiful I love your use of imagery here and the length is perfect. You talk about this picture well fellow poet. well done and thanks for entering xxx


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Great stuff!!!

    Compelling narrative with a wonderful rhyme scheme & rhythm that enthralled throughout in its story telling...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


    • LittleMoon silver member
      December 1, 2008

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      Hey Fritz

      Thank you for your kind comment. I am growing to like doing these type of fantasy poems, they are fun. It is always good to try different things.

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