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Mad Hatter Remix

breaking apart
echo'd heart
pained step-mothers?

because you say i live a sinner's life
always just a caricature

those eyes
hearts of novocaine
the affairs of the heart
severing Aphrodite's masturbated gleam

your words speak so eloquently to a whore's child.

Author notes

a remixing of lines from some of my poems for a contest

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  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Haha nice. I like how this came out. Love the line "affairs of the heart". Thanks for entering and good luck