the edge of the earth
oozed into an expanse
of darkened firmament
encapsulated
in the arms of oblivion
and disappeared
into the null and void
of to exist
this nothingness
Author notes
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A contest entry
- supermassive black hole by JinSays.
629 points, ended December 8, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A bit of a mind-bender, the images that are presented here. I keep invisioning the edge of atmosphere, thin, churning against vacuum, like life boiling against death.
Good write.
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Very intriguing
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I like.
Alot.
thank you, and I wish you the best,
Love,
jin
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