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Rush

Time forgotten

Greater still

Of dreams broken

No longer feel

 

Past days faded

Stranded by

Future's rushing

To deny

 

Look to wonder

Deep contemplate

Soul sinking under

Darkened fate...

 

c2008 vduna

 

 

 

 

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  • NonSense - 2PhLi
    December 1, 2008
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    This was hot!


  • DogFish silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    ...I feel the panic of drowning!!!




  • Ginger Woods
    December 1, 2008

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    fantastic

    This is an amazingly written work of art. The word's just flow, and it dosent matter how short it is it's still amazing. I love the last line "look to wonder, deep contemplace, soul sinking under, darkened fate..." it's a talent to have such an amazing out come with such few words. Great write