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Step out

A new leaf,turns yellow fast
in chilling grief,a landcape so vast

Clear at the touch of dew drops
it holds itself in a clutch,its breathing stops

Its stem so small in this big world so bad
hinders them so small,adores them to be sad

And so the last leaf withered away,shut its hopes down
it had nothing left to say,nevertheless it came around

That leaf is now a tree..a grown,self-confident one
and she is standing with a voice,and can get anything done

Author notes

Hindrances cause sorrow..but getting past them is an achievement...a victory over this narrow-minded world

Anagha-Nataraj

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  • geckogirl silver member
    January 10

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    brilliant pen

    That leaf is now a tree..a grown,self-confident one
    and she is standing with a voice,and can get anything done