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Feather Words

  soft words
tumble
from
    the
        kiss
            of
        your
    breath,
blessing me
  with
    one
        last
          chance.

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  • SilverWolf
    December 14, 2008
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    THAT WAS AMAZING!


    • Mr.
      December 14, 2008
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      Thanks, thanks, thanks.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    beautiful words and interesting form or design you have created with them. is it a feather? it's really pretty

    good luck

    • Mr.
      December 2, 2008
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      Thanks.
      It wasn't really supposed to be a feather, but I'm glad you liked it.


  • Play-A-War
    December 1, 2008
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    Nice and gentle and emotion filled.

    I liked (:

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