I am your Disposable Jesus
Use me as you will
I am your needle
I am your pill
Worship me,love me
Hate me, take your fill
Devour me when you must feed
Cut me when you must bleed
Leave me for dead
When my body is broken,bruised and bled
I am your needle
I am your pill
Use me as you will
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I wrote this a while back and just now got around to posting it..
Please tell me what you think...
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I love it.
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the repetion is my fav part, and this is my fav of your poems.
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Beautiful. I really love how you use yourself to take another's pain in this piece. An old work found is like a ghost back to haunt at times.
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this is interestingly creative.
and it flows so nicely
great write, i love this one.
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Reminds me of the Cure. Brilliant. Good luck in the contest..
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interesting flow and enjamment
and unique concept as well
brief, but so poignant
overall, just extremely well done :]
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It good and has very deep emotion in it, beautifuly written.
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i mean good. sorry
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wow, dats pretty goo.
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WOW!!
That's deep
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