Paw prints diminish
like faded impressions
on her side, of the bed.
Author notes
Prompt: Absent paws 12 Words of Meaning
In a list
A contest entry
- 12 words of meaning by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended December 3, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is so creatively grasping... x
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Ew. This hurts a little. I was just thinking of my old dog Cinderella this morning. Something about paw prints a faded impression on the bed really struck me. Good poem, I love the way you conveyed the message in the words you chose.
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