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Climb of Time

Walking midriff visions precipice path
juxtaposed mortality's monolithic face
no crossroad or forks to choose
no rights or lefts, ups or downs
only one trail forward to follow.

Instead, we walk only to find a point
from which we ascend or descend.

Serenity's silent still waters tarn below.

Pinnacles of stellar mountain peaks above.

Both sanctuaries of our hopes, prayers and dreams.

In-between is the climb of life,

rocky crag footholds, good and bad,
decisions, within arms reach, we choose,

where a dozen feet further lays uncertainty.

Wrinkled lines of times sculptured stone;
smooth cheeks, overhanging brows,
we each have our own different way to climb.

Our journey, we face, is on expressions unknown.

 

Some will be stuck, give up or fall
some will find an easy way
others will not.

There will be those that fight and claw,
push, shove and make war,
start landslides of genocide.

Myself, I'm tired,

weather worn and weary,
maybe, had I gone a few feet left or right,
gone down rather than up,

up instead of down,
and still I wonder,

are my hopes, dreams and visions
what's really up or down there?

If only, I could have had wings!

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    I loved the last line of this, yes indeed if only we had wings. This piece is beautifully written with excellent imagery and verbiage. Throughout the piece I still felt your hope lingering inside the boundaries of the disappointments and yes even in the acceptance. Humanity as a whole has a great capacity to hope even in the face of chaos, corruption, greed and death. What we lack is the determination to change what we never should accept, thus changing hope to reality. I think someone once said the world is full of dreamers, seems like they must all be having nothing but nightmares these days. But again we live in hope, I pray we do not die there as well.
    Lovely work hun, loved it. Hugs, Bunny


  • dustookie2
    December 3, 2008

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    If only what could you do if you had wings you could have your wish ... a wish is a hope and hope is a dream and you could change the world with a dream which can give hope and a wish can be blessed. I am walking back from your ending . In  reality we have to find what path is best suited to us all the life experiences we endure help to make us the person we are today. Beautifully said in your fourth stanza. Definitely words to ponder over. Good luck in the contest


  • Janice M Pickett
    December 2, 2008
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    If Only! But you could have you know.
    a good read and best of luck in the contest.


  • Daughter Grace silver member
    December 1, 2008
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    Peace Flag

    Let me try that again ~ there that's better

  • Daughter Grace silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Love You!

    Wow, dad - you captivate the winds of change so valiantly in this poem. The saying "Be Kind For Everyone You Know Is Fighting A Hard Battle" is the phrase that comes to mind. *peace flag*


  • lunarlunacy
    December 1, 2008

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    Icarus thought the same, but sometimes the hard way up is the only way out, and from there can we then journey in... sounds good but its a bunch of bull when I am really just saying its all about what we make of it. A good reflective read wolfman, best of luck in life, in your writes, and with this contest.


    • Roaddog Wolf
      December 1, 2008
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      We all climb the face of life

      ....it is not always a journey in search of a way out, up or down , easy or hard, we by nature seek to reach our visions and dreams, whether they are as we believed them to be or not, but the journey is often directed by chance, fate, nature and blind choices and faith. We may learn more from our efforts and having heart, doesn't always mean we will fair as well. In the end what difference do we make? Hopefully the difference within.

      Only one thing you can always be sure of and that is, you never really know.
      thank you for the reflective comment and your well wishes, I bid you the same.
      Best regards

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