While ivory gods,
Cry crimson tears,
Followers on bended knee,
They have thrown their humanity,
The very essence of themselves away,
As if no more then refuse,
Followers of perfection,
These peoples cannot,
Will not,
Accept that which they are,
For better or worse,
They carve out the animal,
As if performing brain surgery,
With a butcher,
The animal is caged,
Drowned,
Hidden,
Forsaken,
Instead of embracing it,
They replace it,
Tear down the ivory gods,
Replace perfection,
With that which we all have,
Flawed perfection.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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it's done very well,very discriptive. its been a long time since you last wrote good job.
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This is really good. I love the first two and last four lines. Very good write!


