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Remembering Cinderella

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The dawns were always full of joy, when we were two together
the morning runs were joyous even in the bleakest weather
round the trails and through the trees we charged so gleefully
and I was never happier than when you were with me.

We weren't a man and his dog, you never thought that way
we were a dog and her man, and for me it seemed OK
You'd nip my leg and slap the ground," come on we can't stop now-
there's much to see around the bend" and through the trees you'd plow

We ran those runs so many times, over that same forest trail,
yet every one was new to you, you with your smiling tail.
signaling excitement, when you danced the morning through
now those trails are empty when I walk them without you.

I think about the day that came when running brought you pain,
and so we walked in those final days, just slowly down the lane
Until the day you couldn't rise, I knew what I must do
the time had come to end your pain and bid good bye to you.

It hurt so much to hold you then, those final moments passed,
but I knew there'd be no more pain and you'd have peace at last
I held you close, began to cry, then you looked into my face
your pleading eyes said " don't cry dad, I'm going to a better place"

Sometimes I  think I still see you, beside me on the bed
but it's the weight of memory, when I awake in stead
still I believe your waiting, so I will patiently
until the day we'll run and play for all eternity.

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My beautiful Cinderella was my companion and best friend for nearly fifteen years. I miss her very much.

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  • geckogirl silver member
    April 5

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    perfect heartfelt piece again... this tells alot about a mans character... thank you for sharing with me...


  • aarsalankhalid
    December 11, 2008

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    so nice...................yup,, so nice :)

    You hum as if that dog and you,
    My dear friend, have been friends
    And poem tells of all those walks
    And talks of you dearest two........

    This poem sounds as if in a cave,
    An echo rolls and rolls
    The echo of your love for her,
    It rolls and, these words, mould
    They mould these rolls, with cutest goal:
    The goal to love her whole,
    And change these rolls in verse

    And in this verse an echo rolls.....
    ......................................it rolls for infinity!!!!


  • KayJay
    December 3, 2008

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    Darn... I hate it when I get too emotionally involved in a read This brought back such memories of my own best friend... Perhaps they're both patiently waiting for our sounds at the door... A wonderfully touching write - thank you for sharing... thank you for reminding me...
    Ken


    • Rovingone gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Yes, hopefully Ken, on the other side of the Rainbow Bridge, as it says in the poem. I look forward to that day, when I'll be able to be with her.

  • ennovy silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    Awesome heartfelt poem, I could feel the love in each verse as it got deeper, deeper...see a tear form in your eyes as I read it made me both sad and happy for you to have shaed so many years with you pet. I know your feelings myself....excellent write...novy


  • Angelflower
    December 2, 2008

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    oh.. I don't know what I would do if I lost my Bailey.. this was just so heartfelt and touching.. you really expressed such love and companionship in this write.. I truly loved it.. thank you very much for sharing..


    Angel

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Oh this brought such tears to my eyes I had a cat that hasd that same close relationship and had her put down too. It still haunts me to this day. Your write makes me feel so sad for you and also the memories I have.
    Thank you so much for sharing.
    Gaylene


    • Rovingone gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      Yes, Gaylene. I still think of the last moment together. It was and is the hardest I can remember. It's enough to make you never want to have another pet, if it means seeing that episode repeated.

  • Denerica
    December 1, 2008
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    I feel it too

    We recently had lost my mother in laws dog of 8 years and I went in her place to the animal hospital as he had to be put down...by God's grace he was dying before they really had to do the deed, in the middle of the night...I wrote Me and my shadow, your memories were so vivid...I am fighting back tears now...blessings brother...you tugged on those heartstrings!


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    This was so heartfelt. I can feel how much you loved her. Yes she will be waiting to run by your side again someday. Wagging her tail like crazy when she sees you again. Thank you for sharing. It was such a sweet poem to read. Very delightful! Take care, Sandy


  • WolfHeart silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Precious friend, you don't know how much this touched me.
    I am an animal lover and advocate and have said goodbye to many dear pets. Just recently my two ferrets died - a year apart - of pancreatic cancer. I still hear them in my heart. Only a very good person could understand the way it is with animals. Excellent writing and just heart-tugging.


    • Rovingone gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      I'm so sorry to hear about your pets. That is a tragic way to go. I know just what you mean by hearing them in your heart. They never really leave the heart.
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