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The tangled mass inside my head
has driven me insane.
The person i once used to be,
is dead.
The new,
deranged.

Like a dying rose,
my soul, it withers,
and begins to turn to grey.
The pain i feel is too intense,
I can't stand another day.

The deed is done.
My blood runs free,
and trickles down my hand.
I feel my life slowly slipping away,
like water into sand.

I'm staring at the cieling,
as the lights begin to fade.
The world turns black.
I cease to breathe.
My pain has gone away.

Author notes

ok now, don't get it twisted. i'm not suicidal in any way shape or form. just had an idea and went with it. i wrote it a long time ago and lost it. the fist and last stanzas are new. couln't remember the originals

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