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[ End it all with a bullet ]

End it all with a bullet
Make it all go away with a blade
Scream  it loud
Dont let it all go
Freaking out
Without a doubt
I'm crying
Now dying
For you

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  • Xxcant runxX
    May 21
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    wow this is exactly how i feel


  • PoetryDove
    December 9, 2008
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    I like this poem.
    Short, straight to the point.
    "EndItWithABullet"
    - it's like your friggen title

    But yeah, don't act on it, like BrokenAndScarred said...Too many people do that already.

    I love the last 3 lines
    "I'm crying
    Now dying
    For you:
    - I've felt that way too many times for a significant other, or someone who actually means something.

    Kudos
    --Sarah


  • HisFavoriteMistake
    December 5, 2008
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    I like this

    But dont act on it


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    December 1, 2008
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    Are you okay?
    Seriously. You need to call me.