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Bubblegum

Beautiful, bright pink walls surround,
Unbelievable yumminess on the tip of my tongue,
Bubbles growing larger in size,
Blowing up into a large pink orb,
Lovely scent that hits the air all around,
Evil and sticky not to get in your hair!
Genna loves her bubblegum,
Unfortunately so does Sammi-bum so we'll just ask one simple thing,
"More please?"

Author notes

Okay, I kinda lost it at the end!
But yeah, this is my acrostic for Genna about bubblegum!!!
I love bubblegum
Hope you like it sweetie!!!
xxxx

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 12

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    Hood-Wink!

    I wish I had bubble gum now ~

    You have a wonderful talent for getting the reader to crave something and see it before them
    This is no exception


    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Sunshine Princess
    December 2, 2008
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    I like your poem thank you for writing for my contest have a nice day

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    This is really cute Sammi Doodle she will like this I hope your doing okay good luck in her contest be well.