Eyes bearing as many bags as her white knuckled hands, she grinned a smile with a mouth that was used to saying "avon" and opened it.
"Will you please be a dear and leave my dear daughter to be with a better man?"
Author notes
(Will) and (You)
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4812207
A contest entry
- 2 of 3 rounds of Christmas contests by daviscth.
2000 points, ended December 8, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Respect is asked for, given and understood... :)
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I like the sentences you created for these two words. Thank you for taking part in my contest.
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