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loss

I knew you well,
we were great friends,
oh I would give anything,
to see you again,

but now you are gone,
oh so far out of reach,
the pain that I felt,
it must not repeat,

you still live so close,
but we never talk,
I've still got your cape,
over my bedroom door,

the fun that we had,
when we were so young,
it went by so quickly,
now our friendship is gone,

to see you again,
would light up my day,
but still I would know,
you have to go away,

we were like brothers,
a well practiced show,
but these are just memories,
and I,
can't let go.

this was written about a great friend I once had, who then moved away. we kept in touch for a bit, but then he forgot me. he was like a brother to me, and I just can't let go of the fond memories of the fun we had as children. I have other good friends, but
can't let go of that brilliant friend I had all those years ago. please don't leave a bad comment, just thinking about this guy makes me sad. oh and animal lover 84, this is your chance to get revenge.


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  • just4fun20
    March 10
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    very good

    this is a real good poem i know how you feel me and my friend kat stoped talking and she live only 8 or9 houses up from me and we never talk and im always think about when we was younger and she praticly lived at my house and now i only see her in a car when she leaves


  • Antipodi
    March 10

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    The same happened to me I moved interstate and lost contact and sometimes I think i see them ..you poem quotes the special feelings of loss of special lost friend nice dedication poet


  • MrCrepsley
    December 3, 2008
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    jack. your gonna make my cry. well dun


  • Midori-Ayana
    December 1, 2008

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    Oh, that is so sad...

    Childhood memories are full of special friends and special people, that you lose contact with along the years... Sometimes I think about them, what has become of them... I really miss them all.


    • iguana54
      December 5, 2008
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      thanks, i saw him only 4 years ago, but can not let the memories go. i have lots of good friends, but i still really miss him...

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