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A false Hope

I look into the mirror
And not a suprise I see
All I imaged
Is a hollow shell

How can I be something
That I'm no longer not
How can I smile
When all my life I'm hurting

How can you possibly know me
I'm not worth even remebering
I am nothing to this world
Just as I am nothing to you

I am not even
A memory latched in your mind
A soul of nothingness
That can't find a place to belong

No one can save me
From the darkness in my past
I have no future
I have no path to walk along

How can you possibly
Love a nobody
How can you even say
Your my closest friends
When really you never knew me from the start

So looking into the mirror once more
Can I ever see a change?
Whats the use in hoping
When really the one thing I hope will never come back
So I hurt even more

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  • Unforgiveable
    December 2, 2008
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    Wow! This is amazingly sad and makes me feel like your life is crappy.


  • antonio tan
    December 1, 2008

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    So painful and full of bleeding here, the endless suffering and how it always kills, the emotions and thoughts inside, making you feel so down and empty...


    I hope you feel better soon somehow there


    Welcome here at all poetry


    • X-ShadowSolace-X
      December 1, 2008

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      Yes thats exactly how I feel, it's a never ending cycle that continues to tear open the prescious hearts of the innocents,shit always happens to the good people right?, thanks for sharing your view very much appriacted.