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Fun Sun Run

Ahem, I say,
it's such a fine day!
You wrinkle your button nose at me
and tried to peel my eyes wide open to see.

Hello there,
it's not like anyone would care!
Just have fun,
live your life, out in the sun.

I turn my back to you, not wanting to see you scream—
I just want to live, to fly, to stay, stay, stay in my dream.

A contest entry

Ooh, are you having fun now? :)

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  • poetrandy gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    Nice & fun!

    Cute & Silly! Good luck in the contest!


  • Tqop
    December 1, 2008
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    Very interesting.

    Good poem. Do you care to discuss the background and how it ties in with the poem.