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Heavenly

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You’re my everything, but how you must wait for me,

For my wings do not soar freely as your own.

My inspiration, my dreams come true through each verse,

As you and I blossom in the realms of unknown.

 

On your soft lips I have found the truth I once sought ,

In moments of inspiration faith bestows.

I’ll wait for that final ride as you fly with me,

For your words whisper dreams to my weary woes.

 

I’m here my love, shed your tears upon my shoulder,

Through bright eyes of love, see me as heaven does.

As the winds of wonder become our oxygen,

Let us never ponder upon what once was .

 

May sweet bliss come with each morning drop of dawn dew,

I awake with the scent of you on my skin.

Your loveliness renews my heartbeat of songs,

As heavenly sun-rays warm our thoughts within.

 

Alone in the shadows of the valley’s no more,

We’ll bear one another’s burdens endlessly.

Grasp my hands as fingertips intertwine as one,

As pianos plays each harmonious key.

 

Heavenly…

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My inspiration, http://allpoetry.com/Lonely

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Sighing as I read...The one for whom you write this for must be very happy with this...True love is felt...Your imagery is excellent...And you have used redcatjazzoflove's background.. that I thought so perfectly peace.....Glad you chose this one....It is nature and it is you in many ways I think...Bravo for the write!


  • guardianhost gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Captured

    Once again I have to say excellent read! I loved the inspiration.


  • Trupoet
    December 7, 2008

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    Aww!! what a work of art my darling Tim, you always make me sigh with your vivid and passionate write.

    I love the way you express and detail the feeling of your heart.

    hugss on this cold evening my darling

    you are my dream in a distance

    love
    Elena


  • Blue Rew silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    Breathlessly romantic and woven through with
    faith and encouragement. Wonderful how I can sense a turning into tomorrow between the lines.
    Blue


  • Rele anmwe
    December 4, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful and thoughtful work, I like it a whole lot. I have not seen you post anything in a while, how have you been, happy thanksgiving and Christmas, may you continue to tame our hearts with your beautiful words, have a great one, mack


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    December 4, 2008

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    wow brothis is amazing, so sensual and soft your words are, I l;ove the background too its stunning, it reeally fits well.
    all my love
    love you bro
    kitty xxx


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 3, 2008

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    beyond words can say tears befall as the messages are so close to heartfelt thoughts of messages sent and received often not sure if the tears are of wonder or a mixture of the lost and empty feelings i have been having that seem to pour when i read words of love- you are a true gift upon angel's wings sharing a pure essense of hope and peace. much love always xxxxxx many blessings eternal xxxx


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    The background is beautiful. o found it distracting in the lighter parts to read the white words on golden background. What i did read of the poem I liked. The sentiments were sweet telling of love.


  • AngelEyes13
    December 2, 2008

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    Great Write

    Wow, first, love the picture. Quite the work of art. Love the Ryhme, (I'm a huge fan of rhyme...although I'm not sure I'm spelling it correctly .) Wonderful job! Great wrtie!


  • moon2u
    December 2, 2008

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    This is a gorgeous write Timothy and the background is perfect. So very spiritual in nature.

    applause

    hugs Moony


  • Wandika gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    Very well written Timothy.

    Jim

  • michaeline
    December 2, 2008

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    This is beautiful!The backround,the title the wirds.Everything flowed gently and almost effortlessly all the way through.My favorite was the second paragraph and the end lines.I do not recomend changing anything and I think you should try to enter it in a contest.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Excellent

    As usual, you've expressed yourself quite well. Imagery; rhythm, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing.


  • earthstar
    December 2, 2008

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    it is very lovely the words add such sweet honey and sweetness. Love so pure and the strength to be their when things go wrong.very well done


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    wo wo wo the words the deep words this was a sold out show honey you had nice inspiration dear love and kisses


  • Lonely
    December 1, 2008

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    A very very pretty piece of poetry.. Oh, and the way you concluded it,
    You melt my heart with each line..
    Can i get back my nose? I love this poem.. and I thank you beyond words for being so sweet.

    Peace,
    Lonely


  • isabellacohen
    December 1, 2008
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    lovely write

    lovely writing,
    tender and warm,
    best wishes,
    Isabella


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    What I could read of this was lovely, but the bright lights behind the white words wash out much of several stanzas. I can't really form an opinion of the whole. There didn't seem to be an option to hide the background.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    December 1, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Ther eis soemthing about such a beautiful warm love poem that comes straight from the heart that really just gets to me and well really inspires me to want to write myself. I absolutely really love this write from you here bro as it is just amazing how depe and wonderfully penned the words flow. any ways with that being said I really am awed at the incredible depth and beauty of this write from you and keep up the great work


  • DesolatELifE
    December 1, 2008

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    Beautiful. I guess the only comment that can describe the beauty of a beautiful poem would be a beautiful poem dedicated to the beauty of the poem.
    Having said that, my opinion on this poem is probably clear.


  • tara wilson gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    "I awake with the scent of you on my skin
    You’re loveliness renews my heartbeat of songs" - love that...

    this is so beautiful Tim, very romantic=)

    [you're should be your, i think? ..also, the background made this very hard to read!!lol]

    other than those small things..lol...this is very sweet=)


  • Aimee Hill
    December 1, 2008

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    Hm. What can I say that hasn't been said already?
    Probably not a whole lot...

    But anyway...
    Once again, your love has shown through your pen,
    which is one of many reasons I do enjoy reading you. Like the saying goes... you were your heart on your shoulder.... You, my friend, wear it on your pen.

    Awesomely penned, as always... your rhyme is never forced, and the words you choose to use are perfect. You always paint a vivid picture, Timothy.

    I loved reading this...thank you for penning it.

    (Oh...and the background is beautiful!!)


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    December 1, 2008

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    wow this is sooo truly magnificent and so beautiful!!! You did such a very lovely job with this piece!!!! I love it!!! Your details and descriptions are fantastic this is such a beautiful portrayal!!! I can't even express how marvelous this truly is you did such an amazing incredible job!!! I love it!!!


  • Providence
    December 1, 2008

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    Sweet and heartfelt words of love that indeed make heaven a place right here on Earth in the presence of the one whom we feel so intensely for.

    Beautifully done!

    Marianne


  • poetryrocksmysox
    December 1, 2008

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    Heavenly,

    Indeed this is so well done, the rhyme is so flawless, and rolls off the tongue. I love the background as well, your friend did a wonderful job with this. And you were inspired indeed by love, as all your poetry of love inspires so many others when you put that heart on paper for all to see. You're a wonderful man, and thanks for being so giving with your loving soul. Laters poeticweaver.

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