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One Tear

The single precious tear
Shed so long ago
Hitting the pavement silently
Leaving your face aglow
Unveiling the strong woman released
By the shedding of emotion
Providing inner peace,
real love and strength.
Your true beauty is evident
Your pure love is real
An amazing star that shines bright for all to see.....

Author notes

In response to: FINALLY SHED

The tear that you see now

Is
The

Tear I should have shed

A
L
O
N
G

Time
Ago.

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  • New-n-Improved
    December 17, 2008

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    I like it

    Your words are pure and straight from your heart. I like a poet who can really use poetry to get a point across. The poem is outstanding and it shows why you are a creative writer. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    You did a good job on this and I really enjoyed reading! Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • sense surreal gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    stunning...

    Shed so long ago
    Hitting the pavement silently
    Leaving your face aglow
    Unveiling the strong woman released

    yes a true beauty unmasked in misty eyes