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Merry Xmas - The Return.


Tinselled trees are bright and glowing.
Bankruptcy leaves you broke and owing.


                   

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Black Narcissus.

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  • daviscth silver member
    December 8, 2008
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    http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2429747

    The final round is posted. Good luck


  • PureRomance
    December 3, 2008

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    I agree with Gaylene on this background. You did a good job on this. Keep up the wonderful work and God bless you always and good luck in the contest.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 2, 2008
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    Oh how very clever and true! And the title is perfect!
    All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • Vickie J
    December 1, 2008

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    This was witty and unfortunately true write. I think anyone who reads this will have to chuckle-and that's always a good thing. Best wishes in the contest!vj

  • daviscth silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    LOL. This is a wonderful take for your two words. I love the imagery and your words are so true. Thanks for your entry.


  • suseann
    December 1, 2008

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    Witty verse! And so absolutely true. We humans alway get attracted to shiny things as much as birds I think. And so less sense in overly coveting them to the point of debt.

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