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Absent Paws

Her absent paws
Still trace the trails
They once left
On fond hearts frail

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    beautifully expressed... x


  • poetryality silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Excellent! And rhymed! I don't know how you managed that! Very nice! There will always be "traces", and that is a grand happening! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee