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Men Don't Cry

Never have I heard him cry
Never have I seen his tears
Never had I held him close in consolation
Never have his cheeks been wet but from sweat
Never have I heard him crying
Although he hurts deep inside
His heart shattered into pieces
He uses booze for glue
And mends his heart back together
But where, Where?
Are the splints that fill the chips
Of his booze mended heart
His heart leeks with pain Through the to tiny to see holes
The chips needed to be filled By splints of visible emotion
He plays hide the tears and seek the booze
Because he fell victim to someone who said
Men don’t cry.

 

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    I'm sorry, although emotional and I am sure heart felt this piece does not have the depth nor the poetic beauty that I am looking for. You may re-enter but first please take a look at the finalist list to see the kind of pieces I am looking for. Hugs, Bunny