Tonight we leave the lights on
I want to be able to see
The pleasure in your eyes
As my tongue barely touches
Just teases the head of your
Big hard beautiful cock.
One hand gently plays
with your balls, softly squeezing
While my tongue traces
the outline of all your manhood.
I want to see the look of excitement
That passes over your face
When my mouth slides down
Over your entire shaft
Taking you all the way in
Tonight we leave the lights on
So I can smile to myself
At the expression on your face
As I slowly unbutton my shirt
And expose my large natural
Breasts to your awaiting eyes
To see that smile creep across
Your luscious lips as I
Continue my strip tease
Seductively sliding my skirt
Down over my shapely hips
Letting it fall to the floor.
Tonight we leave the lights on
As we explore each others bodies
With fingertips and tongues alike
Our passion filling up the room
Like a brightly burning candle.
Intense pleasurable moans
Echoing off the walls around us
As we touch and pleasure each other
With a loving gentleness all our own
Tonight we leave the lights on
So I can look into your beautiful eyes
At the exact moment you first enter me
Slowly but with great wanting
As you feel me tightly surrounding you
And we begin moving together
To the music that only we can hear
The soundtrack of our love making
heavy breathing and the low, slow
moans that escape our lips
as we bring each other to ecstasy
and back again for more.
Yes baby tonight we leave the lights on.
Please tell me what you think
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...Do I sense a bit of pent up....aggression? Hot stuff here.
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Hell Yeah!!! Pent up...what ever you want to call it!
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This is absolutely lovely; again you demonstrate that an erotic write can be romantic and sensitive as well as arousing. You had a lot of wonderful lines here. Well done!
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Thanks Bruce!!! I like to say I'm sensually erotic! lol! Glad you enjoyed
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this explains your name
first i'd like to thank you for you comment on green garage bags. as for this lighted room? what other way is there to do it? i have a piece i was hesitant to post but you've inspired me to do so.
THANK YOU!
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HOT!!!
I love it, very sensual and erotic. I love how you repeat the title line throughout the poem and all of the wonderfully detailed imagery. Wow, I am going to need a cold shower now.
-Garrett
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Welcome back babe, you certainly know how to turn up the heat! another good sensual erotic poem from my favorite,
poetess.
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wow
the lights on huh? damn! what a woman! l.o.l. most women want the lights off even before the clothes come off!! l.o.l. very very hot lady!!
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i think it is best done with dimmed lights but that is just me, you did something strong with this, like a drug or something each line, if i place my nose to the screen and inhaled it was be intoxicated in minutes, keep it flowing
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Nice to see you penning again hon
This is a hot write from you here and I love it!
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WOW...a real hard love song
singing in a spotlight
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