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i am

i am in love with
whisky in a fifth
i am in love for
all those little whores
i am in love when
all to see is sin
i am in love to
take back the vomit we threw
i am in love because
the feeling of the buzz
i am in love
with the way it all shoves

Author notes

i don't know what to tell you but i love doing the wrongs.

are you in love?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 1, 2008

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    lol, i kind of don't know what to say about this one, that is neither a good or a bad, but i do like the honesty and rawness of the poem, keep it flowing


  • Cube
    December 1, 2008

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    Short and simple. A good write. Maybe being in love what is all bad in life negafies itself and makes it good.