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Unwritten Chapters





a life in words
threaded by heartache,
bound with sorrow

laid bare
for all to see,
each page curled
against the next

until you held
my words in your hands

now I watch them fall,
disappear with yesterday

chapters of tomorrow
will be written,
ink flowing
with words of hope

 




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Prompt ~ Book
50 words

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  • meena krish
    December 14, 2008

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    This is just beautifully written. I like the softness
    of it, the flow and how it touches the heart. Congrats on the win


  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 13, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering my contest with this poem I really like the extended metaphor of this write - and the way you have written it so gently makes it more beautiful and touching

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • liltulip gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    this is quite beautiful!

    touched me as well!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    December 1, 2008

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    this is truly well written sis you def touched my hert indeed a very heartfelt write!!! This is beautiful!!


  • Angelflower
    December 1, 2008

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    A very wonderful write. something that touched my heart for some reason.. Best of luck in the contest Juls..

    Angel

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