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Great Advice

Always count your eggs
before they hatch,
and keep your chickens in a basket.
And carry round
some Blu-tack
in case you blow a gasket.

A stitch in time
means no holey socks,
and never spit at llamas.
And always put
your umbrella up
Whenever you eat bananas!

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Cool... Fun, funny & silly, so I love it...

    Great rhyme, rhythm & flow wrapped in a wacky narrative that didn't fail to raise a smile...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!
    And good luck in the contest...


  • poetrandy gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Strange!

    12 lines -- no more long ones -- TEN line limi! This is the last one that I'll let in! Good luck in the contest!


    • EmeraldDreams
      December 1, 2008
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      Oh, sorry! I thought under 50 words was ok too.... I can change it if you want me to?


  • StarEyes
    December 1, 2008

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    Thanks I needed a fun read this morning! Just what the dr. ordered! But some of this, well, actually had a hint of seriousness to it, and well, just did what the piece was meant to do! What a great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta