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Nakedness of Me

I stand
here before you
Mind is an open light
Thought has become visible
Communication satiates fear
Not one inch of self is hidden
and a feeling of liberation
Now I am to you
Fearless

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    this is an excellent take on the prompt. I really enjoyed reading this. I do however need to point out. I need you to place the link in your AN please.

    good luck in the contest
    kat


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Superb plus

    Ah, I can relate. A very fine write, just as it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Great write
    Love the honestly penned
    Revealing you
    Best wishes and good luck
    Julie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 1, 2008

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    when you expose all that you have, there is nothing to be afraid of, that is what i see in this poem more then just words, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest