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Reflections on My Image

I saw a face that looked like me,
and I saw it looking back at me.
I smiled and saw it grin.
I whirled and saw it spin.
Everything I did, it did with me!

When I said, “Please, do not mimic me,”
silently it mimed this back at me.
I turned my back on it,
but sneaked a peek at it,
and I saw it peeking back at me!

From my side it never seems to stray.
I don’t think it’s ever far away.
No matter what I do
it always does it, too,
so it must be near me every day!

Very careful now I have to be,
since my image always follows me.
With just the faintest light
it shows both wrong and right –
even things I wish that none could see!

I saw a face that looks like me,
and it always seems to act like me.
More honest than a friend,
on it I may depend
to show me the “me” that others see!

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Upon reflection, I see it really is all about me. Of course, from your point of view you may see a little bit of you.

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  • greeny
    December 3, 2008
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    wow!!!
    creatively done..


  • JinSays gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    and I love it.
    Wonderful write, I wish you all the best,
    Jin