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Helplessness





Write on the clouds
traversing, if anyone takes
my letters to you,
but, no hikes,
failed to deliver.

The silent zephyr,
neither understand freedom,
nor to serve imprisonment;
to ward off cold of my soul.














Author notes

prompt:
“No one is free, even the birds are chained to the sky.”
-Bob Dylan

A contest entry

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  • She Stole My Voice
    December 1, 2008

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    Oh my god.
    This has a VERY good chance of winning.
    I'm bookmarking this when the contest is over.

    Thank you for entering.


    -rainbow