Paws left in mud
stay until the rains
fade into the past
Author notes
All that is living leaves behind. Prompt: Absent paws
A contest entry
- 12 words of meaning by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended December 3, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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creatively and emotionally drawn... x
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Thank you, my best wishes.
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Sad and wistful write, Poet. Brought tears to my eyes.
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Thank you, my best wishes.
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Excellent! The imagery is stunning in 12 simple words. Sometimes the rain washes away the pain as well. I wish tyou the best in the challewnge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thank you kind lady, my best wishes.
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Oh yes that is so true
Beautifully penned
Best wishes and good luck to you
Julie
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Thank you kind lady, my best wishes always.
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