Lost in the bogs
echoes of barking
I lost my friend
drowning
Author notes
Prompt: pet cemetary, when I was 10 years old I lost my pet fox terrier in the bogs of spring. I never was able to reach his barking and in silence i never found him at all.
A contest entry
- twelve words of complete depth by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended December 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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how sadly expressive... x
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How sadly expressive, does not sound right to me!
Does it sound right to you?
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Oh that is so sad. I'm so sorry for you. A great write though, good job.
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