night falls softly, its gentle caress
lingering within the air
and embracing sorrows form
hidden within the depths of sadness
ripples bleed
warm veils of comfort
and tender rays encloses
capturing her beauty
as single drop of hope is shed
Author notes
credit : http://dl4.glitter-graphics.net/pub/999/999734yqlbloeokb.jpg
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
1500 points, ended December 7, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully written - love the words you got from the image.
Thanks for entering. -
Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Another beautiful write. I wish you all the best.
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A beautiful write yet such sadness, but woven within that sadness you have given the reader such tenderness.Your last stanza tugged hard at my heart.
I wish you all the best in the contest with much love and happiness.
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Such a sad poem but with a gentle tenderness throughout. Excellent piece of writing.
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awww, wow, this is sooo sorrowful, yet it has a beautiful delicacy lingering around it. nicely done and good luck, hope all is well
with love, Stephanie ♥
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