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Alone

Missing image

Bereft Senior's,

torn tormented soul
curses God for taking,

his companion replacement.

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Prompt: Pet Cemetary 12 Words of complete depth

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  • Concrete Angel silver member
    August 20, 2009

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    This is poignant and surreal. I don't see why this was trophy-less. It's so expressive and I think truly radiates the human condition when it comes to our beloved pets. Fantastic job with the prompt!


  • Lavender Butterfly
    December 2, 2008
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    sadly expressive... x


  • Rovingone gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    Was this personal? It sounds like something you personally witnessed and experianced. It certainly strikes a note in the heart.


  • hyper thing
    December 1, 2008
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    this poem is really good as normal