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Letting go

Lips met,
wishing goodbye;
bits of love remained -
a long gone promise of forbidden love. 

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    lovely piece ah, the imagery is lovely

    good luck


  • Shakes-spear
    December 1, 2008

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    Forbidden love

    THAT IS A GREAT IDEA HERE! I LIKE WHERE YOU WENT WITH THE PROMPT! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST, THE SHAKER